Last Presentation

After reading your first draft, it was really nice to see the different types of wall drawings by Sol Lewitt. I think your thesis is interesting, bold, and thus could be difficult to defend, especially with Krauss and everyone else is on the other side. While Sol Lewitt's "Sentences" may suggest otherwise, I have to admit that my first instinct when you showed all of those pieces in the beginning was that he was aiming for something rational--they were all geometric, with lines and squares or triangles, and basic colors. This said, I understand where you are going, and your proposal is clear and should be successful, as long as you support it well.