Ryan: Your subject matter was interesting but your thesis could be more focused. Art is commodity and commodity is art...but what's it all about?
Karen: Miro, yes. I wonder what you'll settle on for your thesis. As you know, I liked your last one.
Sierra: Your choice to focus on one work really helped you keep the scope tight. Your thesis, I think, is that Manet is reflecting something about society. This is a very broad claim, and it is probably applicable to nearly every artist. Maybe be a little more specific.
Brie: I think you have a lot of potential in your paper but that it hasn't been fully realized. What do you mean by "objectify?" This is an area which has received a lot of coverage so you may have to find a new way to approach it. It sounded like you had something you wanted to say...
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