Kate: Interesting topic. I like how you have focused on a particular art event to explore some of Rothko's paintings. I did want to hear more of a personal thesis, however. Also there was a lot of good info in your presentation but some of it was repeated in different sections.
Yiwen: You had a clear thesis, which is good. You also seem to have good knowledge of the subject matter. Your thesis could be better developed, though. One thing I thought was that you might want to focus on just one video artist. Acconci seems like an ideal candidate as he was a large portion of your presentation and a very intersting subject offereing a lot of possibilities.
Anite: Your paper would probably benefit from a scope limitation, you're tackling a lot of material. It seemed your thesis was about graffiti artists reclaiming urban space. Who are these graffiti artists? You glanced over that. I felt like I was left knowing only a little more about the subject matter. You can delve deeper.
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