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Tumaj- i really like that you are doing impressionist art. i think to strengthen your argument you need to be more specific than just how impressionist art was revolutionary because every movement can be considered revolutionary in some form or another

Brittany - Your discussion of Dali was interesting, but it could be stronger if you tie in more aspects other than the symbolism of the paintings. 

Jasmin - I really liked your discussion of Graffiti art. i think the making an argument about the preservation of culture you touched on could make for a good paper.

Phyllis - you want to focus on the metamorphic qualities of shuttlecocks. this sounds like an interesting idea.

Sarah - i really enjoyed your discussion on chicano feminism. the Virgin Mary seems to be your thesis which i would agree with. Also comparing two of the virgin mary's might make for an interesting paper.