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Alfredo- i like that he gave a brief history of the murals. It is a very interesting topic and once he narrows down what he want to talk about i think it will be a very interesting paper

Audrey- there were lots of ideas, but i think you really need to focus in on one or two pieces of artwork and analyze them. Also make sure your argument is not something we already believe to be true, but i think the whole visuality vs materiality will be interesting once an argument is in place. 

Michelle - very good and clear proposal. There is a lot of research to work with. From what she researched already, it should be a very interesting paper. Also i would just pick one or two artworks and just analyze those.

Kevin - did a good job explaining the relationship between machine and man. Once he narrows down the topic it will be a very good paper

Amanda- talked about dan flavin. not quite sure the direction she is going with the paper, but the artwork was very interesting.